Pw: Cover letter #2

I need to add more detail and information to each paragraph. I also want to structure the essay more clearly and format to understand. Some stuff were repetitive and bland. My writing needs to expand and further explain my support. I haven't added any transitions to my essay in order to improve my essay.

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