Peer Draft #2

Peer Draft 2

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  1. UnknownMarch 7, 2018 at 10:52 AM

    You should add transitions and go in depth with your analysis of the visual. You should increase the length of the essay as well because it is short. Make sure you talk about how you feel about the visual as well because the essay is supposed to tell the audience how you feel about the visual.

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  2. UnknownMarch 7, 2018 at 10:52 AM

    Add on more to your essay and go more in depth. You can also add transitions at the end of your paragraphs to make it flow better.

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